The
little river flowed downstream
Taking
everything within it's reach
While
the pebbles clung like a leach
All
the salmons fought like a team
The
river laughed with joy
As
it watched everyone struggle to stay
But
he knew there was a high price to pay
If
he played them like a toy
Eventually
the river came to a halt
As
it poured quickly into a lake
The
river realised his fun was done
And
he thought it was all his fault
He
realised he had apologies to make
The
horrible thoughts weighed a tonne
This
is an Italian Sonnet on a river that did things without thinking
about the consequences.
"All
the salmons fought like a team" - It is a simile trying to show
the effort they put into trying to get upstream. Line 8 has a simile
as well, "If he played them like a toy" which is comparing
the river to how a child plays with their toys often by tossing them
around. "While the pebbles clung like a leach" is also a
simile.
There
is personification in line 2"taking everything within it's
reach, line 5,"The river laughed with joy", line 6, "As
it watched everyone"
There
is a little bit of alliteration in line 11 and a metaphor in line 14,
"The horrible thoughts weighed a tonne."
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