Sunday 16 June 2013

The River's Regrets

The little river flowed downstream
Taking everything within it's reach
While the pebbles clung like a leach
All the salmons fought like a team

The river laughed with joy
As it watched everyone struggle to stay
But he knew there was a high price to pay
If he played them like a toy


Eventually the river came to a halt
As it poured quickly into a lake
The river realised his fun was done
And he thought it was all his fault
He realised he had apologies to make
The horrible thoughts weighed a tonne




This is an Italian Sonnet on a river that did things without thinking about the consequences. 
"All the salmons fought like a team" - It is a simile trying to show the effort they put into trying to get upstream. Line 8 has a simile as well, "If he played them like a toy" which is comparing the river to how a child plays with their toys often by tossing them around. "While the pebbles clung like a leach" is also a simile.
There is personification in line 2"taking everything within it's reach, line 5,"The river laughed with joy", line 6, "As it watched everyone"
There is a little bit of alliteration in line 11 and a metaphor in line 14, "The horrible thoughts weighed a tonne."

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