Sunday 16 June 2013

The Dark Cave


A brown bat by the name of Wend
Flew into a cave
In an attempt to find a friend
Who he was suppose to save

Little did he know
There lay a monster in wake
Just waiting for a poor soul
For his jaws to take

A twist and turn at every bend
Forced Wend to make choices
But as he went down one end
He began to hear voices

It was the monster and a friend of Wend
And seemed to not be in need of a hero.

This poem is about a bat who thought his friend needed help. Despite knowing that there would be dangers ahead, he went to save him. 
The poem has a rhyme scheme of abab cdcd efef gh.
In line 1 and 3 there is alliteration. "A brown bat by the name of Wend"  "In an attempt to find a friend"
There is an internal rhyme in line 13, "It was the monster and a friend of Wend."

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